interesting character,need more work on technic may be

can you be more specific on what exactly i need to work on, and how to do it better. though I have been drawing sense I can remember I am really inexperienced to the digital medium (I know I am asking to be ripped apart, but how else am I going to get better?)

Colors are good, for me. You need more work in anatomy, face, arms, chests... Check some Loomis books. I remember in your WIP some sketch by Sandra, she made a great work.

thanks for your comment, the anatomy is on purpose. i think in the future i need to decide weather i am going for realism, or if it is more cartoony...in this it is right in the middle and i think it is a bit confusing.

nice way of painting
i like the colors a lot they deliver some great mood
but there are sopme weaknesses with the anatomy
try doing some more references(real/not printed or anything persons i think are the best are the best for practice)

Comment: This is a great idea!

Critique: The thing with the anatomy is this, you can still make her proportions all crazy like a cartoon, but the anatomy still needs to be right, do you get what I mean? For it to be believable in a 3D space, the perpective and anatomy need to be right, even if you are exaggerating the proportions. On the Discussion thread I made a topic called "Loomis Books Here". Download them and read them if you can.

Cool character
though have to agree with the weaknesses in the anatomy and
you shoud try to differentiate more the different textutures
skin and fabrics looks almost the same

Nice colour choices. Agree about anatomy, needs some work but overall nice painting